All Comments on 'I Am My Master's Slut Ch. 10'

by MsVixen416

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
YOU HAVE A NICE SERIES GOING PLEASE CONTINUE

Your series had me a little confused. However, I continued reading to resolve some of my confusion. I did not see a true transitions form Sara to Betsy or visa versa. It was never explained how and why she was shaven. However, I enjoyed the storyline. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Sadly disappointed

I loved this story until this point. I just don't buy the ending. He had been so protective of her, so caring and so aware of what she really needed as a slave. Now he does a 180, flogs her, emotionally breaks her, and then bangs her. I don't think this particular chapter's ending adequately caters to Betsy's/Sarah's mental requirements, not a slip I expect from your stories.

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