by Cobaltofdark
Love the internal dialogue, really shows the characters motives and struggles.
Love how she continue battles with in her mind. She love it but hates it. Loved mom's response to dad at breakfast "Pink Lily" that was great. Hope you let at least mom see the new plug. Not sure if I was ready to see the blow job at the end, I would have rather that waited at least to the party, cause now everyone will know and that takes away some of the advantage from Alathia. But not my story I am just reading your fantasy. keep up good work and thanks for sharing.
Pappasleaze!
Ty Pappasleaze I appreciate the feedback and you'll see I promise I've wasted nothing the party is very much a big event.
Laahdin part 3 is with editor thet are very hard at work making it ready for upload and part 4 is also finished so it will keep going
Well, Bex is really fucked now. Teddy will spread the word how much of a slut Bex is and maybe Alathia will be able to contain some of the fallout. It does seem strange that Alathia's parents do not know of the cameras in the house, or do they know? It seems that the last chapter (6) is the end of the story? Just how far will Bex fall into a total slut and how far will Alathia pimp her big sister out? I doubt that Bex will be able to recover from this sudden turn of events just the second day of her slavery.
Ty no we're a long way from done the birthday party is part 7 and then a supirse at the end of the party sets up part 8 9 10 stick with me you'll enjoy the ride