All Comments on 'I Became My Little Sister's Bitch Ch. 03'

This is amazing, I want to read more, love the parents dynamic and hope it gets more involved aswell.

I like the idea of the younger sister breaking the older sister with the recording. I like how you seem to understand that BDSM is not just pain. Nice job.

Okay you know I have really been into this story. I love the dominance Alathia has over Bex also what Mom has over dad. I don't understand the need for the extreme torture to her sister as controlling her horniness seems to do the job. Love the collar, she needs that reminder. love the idea of the two girls and mom going for a little girl clothes run. I am one that doesn't care for piercing submissive just to be piercing them, there needs to be reasons and a meaning behind it, just not of a fan of it. I don't know what Jill and the intern really had to do with the story , maybe we will get more on that later. I can't wait till our dressed up little girl meets Pinky. I also don't know why she needed the mantra seems again that wasn't needed to break her. my opinion, but agin as I said before it's your story. Can't wait to see the next chapter

The scene with the intern was to demonstrate that Jill will submit to a powerful man aka Chris Wesker Alathia bio father (Que) evil music bwahaha. What you see as torture Alathia sees as using her property how she wants she loves her but she isnt capable of a healthy affection shes a sadist.

Edit and update please: Your editing notes are still in the finished printed story (bottom of page 2 on this site) - perhaps you can edit the story in a few spots and when fixed, remove my comment ! Another thing, at one point referred to Bex as her Little sister instead of big sister. Overall I’m enjoying the story and the idea of daughter following Moms footsteps!