All Comments on 'I Control This'

You let the man be controled by a horny woman when he should have thrown her out once she was stripped and then called the police. Either way, he could have her charged for B & E and assult on him and he had the whip lashes to prove it.

"Oh so you done!!!!" Don't ask me no questions, you said you was done Gimme that load!"

A poorly written story about a whimp "male" who never has been a man nor disrespected her by a writer still in the 6th grade.

We have all the wimp stories we need, we really do not need ome so poorly written by someone with no grammer.

A bit rocky in a few passages but overall a good effort. Thanks for putting your thoughts into text.

And to the two English language Phd.'s who posted their comments, care to explain what a "whimp" is? The word is in no dictionary I own.

You will see a wimp, you and Leo both.

Oh Lord people. So unless a man is beating a woman's ass he's a whimp? That's a damn shame. Yes, he could have thrown her out but in a lot of these stories on this site, if we wanna be ultra realistic, any one could call the police and charge them or find a big brother/uncle/cousin or have their father hunt the disrespectful man down and whoop that ass. Gosh, you don't like it. We get it. Where are you're writings?