All Comments on 'I Don't Want Your Wife'

A heads up next time would be very much apprecated!

I'm not judging people who fly their freak flag, just appropriate warnings would be nice.

Many women fantasize about seeing their man with another. A lot of guys will do it in the right circumstances.

to not understand that this story is GAY. twiztedstories you are worse than the dog shit I scrap off my shoe.

First of all, don't step in dog shit; that's dumb. Also, if he doesn't want the WIFE... then...?

a real turn on.

Where does that leave Jane? Does she end up using a huge strap-on on young Aiden with the airbrushed jeans....

First she find out her husband stealing money, then he's force to have sex with another man in front of her and finally she sees how much he enjoys it. Why so much hate for this poor women?

Okay, maybe this 52 year old is not as straight as he's convinced himself he is.......I just came harder than I have in 10 - 12 years! Thanks Twiztedstories - to paraphrase another commenter, "what's next?"

One of my favorite stories on literotica, keep up the great writting.

I have read a lot of stories but this story really made me so horny and so wanting to be seduced again. I loved the fact it all happened in front of his wife. I have read it twice now and have cum every time very hard. MMMMMM thank you!

I loved it, hot damn

Stupid people always need warning labels. "Do not put your hand into the blender" you ignorant wretch! Occasionally glance at the ground while walking and you won't need to scrape your shoes so often. The category is non-consent/reluctance sex and that is exactly what the story is about.

I want it!

You really should continue writing. Yours are some of the best around. ;)

Once a man takes you in front of your wife or girlfriend, and takes you so profoundly that you end of begging for more, you're no longer a man. No matter what, manhood is gone. I know - though I'm still married my wife came in on the last part of my ravishment, me on my knees, my hands gripping my warehouse supervisor's thick thighs, begging him to finish off by coming in my mouth. And she saw him flood my mouth and face with his prodigious cum. She hasn't asked for a divorce but we live as roommates with me sleeping in another bedroom, handling all the housework chores and only experiencing sex with her by me lying on my belly between her thighs with my mouth locked on her fat pussy lips and clit. Game over.

Damn! Wish I were Tim!

Gay stories should be labeled as such,asshole!

that was the hottest story my first time with a wan was a little different I was drugged and token when I came to I was being fucked the greatest feeling I ever had was his cock deep inside me filling me with his cum and the feeling I was his I never left that was 20 yeas ago

This was so hot there should be a part 2

I'm a woman and this story completely blew me. Please do a follow up. I would like to know what happens next.

I have to say this is one of the hottest stories I've read. I've since read all of your stories, and they are all great as well. The intensity you build is palpable, and really captures that sense of falling under the spell of pure lust.

Please write more! Thanks,

i wish they included the wife so she wouldn't be upset - hope that happens in a sequel. forced bi is my wife's fantasy and i hope we get there - but it won't take much force if my constant jerking to this story is any indication.

This is just homo erotica. What a mistake for me.

Came 3 times to this!

My tastes run to more humiliation and resistance from Tim but, still a hot story that makes this married closet submissive, hard.

As I have said before, it takes a lot for most men to overcome their socially conditioned "heterosexuality". That is why extreme measures are needed in order for them to feel the real pleasures of man on man...

Can we get a part 2. Excellent story...

Fuck hot story...wish I could see the movie version...LOL!

jfc didn't think I'd be so into this...hot stuff

Got me hard and dripping with precum. Please write part 2. Maybe incorporate some bdsm for the wife.

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Wow!

I would love to have a job with a boss like that.id let him make me a cock whore for everybody there.

Since this was written seven years ago, this probably doesn't matter. Tim shouldn't have been so easy. That said, I don't know how I would've handled that in real life as the wife. It's good to read and I've always wanted to fuck a man personally.

Yet, I'm a grammar whore. Don't use parentheses in fiction. It's just stupid and pretty fucking annoying. There are other grammar errors, but doing that annoyed me the most. A third person point of view doesn't need parentheses.

It was a good fantasy. People who argued that it was gay male were stupid, but I guess when we're horny, that may not matter. There should've been more reluctance from Tim and his wife. Tim could have fought with him and given in eventually. Hell, they could've started the story in the office and sprinkled back story throughout the discussion between Tim and John.

I know the chances are slim, but I hope you come back one day and write a part 2 for this! Would love to see what Tim and John get to next ;)

I am a woman and I absolutely love gay and forced eroticas like this... Wishing that the creator could post more...

That's a hot story

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Wow this was hotttt!! I am a woman, and this was mind blowing. I don't know how I would have handled it though if I were the wife and my man was taken like this in front of me. It feels erotic, and at the same time I wouldn't want anyone to take him. haha! Can't make up my mind. I wish Tim wasn't so easy in this story. This should have been non-consensual for a while at least with BDSM involved. Author please come back and write more. I have never read a story like this. HOT!!!

How I wish I was Tim. I have never been with a man but reading this story made me cum without touching myself. It is so hot reading this story I want a man to fuck me and make me a gay cock sucking faggot.

This was a good story…erotic as hell with the wife watching, but a sad ending for my taste. I’d have like to seen more talking between John and Jane to humiliate Tim as he was being used…maybe Jane taking pics. An ending where John gives a used and humiliated Tim back to Jane and John and Jane negotiate a payback plan where they keep the money and Tim has to service John on a schedule while Jane gets to watch. Tim is now a gay play toy and a submissive husband to stay out of jail and Jane gets to be turned on forever.