All Comments on 'I Found My Wife's Black Dildo Pt. 03'

Wow!

Another great continuation- getting the seduction secondhand isn’t as exciting, so I look forward to the camera reveal next chapter. Based on previous work, I’m sure it’ll be excellent. She’s been really good at acting normal to her husband- a cheating natural. I expect she’ll move on to Hannah’s friends in the not distant future… maybe worth a 5th chapter?

Interesting development, I think my preference would have been for Allie to reveal her cheating. Looking forward to the next part.

Amazing story! I cant wait to read next chapter.

Nice, but I didn't like the blackmailing part. Your stories always seem to have an element of that. So, his wife has been cheating and he doesn't care?

I absolutely love this serie! I don't know yet what to think that little bleak turn (Richard in blackmail-type upper hand) but I definitely anxiously waiting sequel(s). Maybe Jack will get access to material what Richard has recorded together with Allie?

Good stuff. 5🌟

Really disappointed, you tell us it’s 3 parts, then say it will be at least 4 and the 4th is an absolute waste of convoluted words.my too go to when reviewing is whether I got off or not? I didn’t. Reminds of when your favorite band comes out with a new song and it is just a filler for the long awaited album. The band has written classics, but now gives its fans a bubble gum song that wasn’t worthy of the wait. I’m not leaving any stars, this was certainly not one of your best, you’ve set the bar high and you didn’t even attempt to reach it. Waste of a loyal fans time

Absolute yawn. I found myself blowing through the pointless content waiting to get to the hot parts. There just wasn’t any. The part where Jack threatens the better business bureau was small and silly for a guy who hired the dude in the first place. I was perfectly fine with Robert taking advantage of the situation but you could have written it better and certainly hotter

In the past you’ve led readers through seductive roads but not this time, I feel taken hostage by the author, sold something that wasn’t delivered

Wow, this story is so hot and every chapter is even hotter than the one before

So it is hard to wait for chapter 4 where hopefully Jack will see (at least on video or cam) how Robert had turned his sweet wife into black cock loving woman. And after a weekend full of getting black cock and Robert leaving her life she will crave sex with black men so desperately. Then will come the time for Brock and his friends…

This story just gets better and better and better. Jack is getting to a point where his fantasy is becoming his biggest nightmare. Be careful what you wish for, I think was mentioned. Looking forward to part 4

I didn't but I was very tempted to give this one star until the next part comes out.... Can't wait to read MOAR!

This ran off the rails for me.

Far to convoluted

I enjoyed the "story" in this chapter. While it didn't have the flaming sex that Fifth Estate is known for, it did tell the essentials of Allie's fall from grace. I'm sure the next chapter will incorporate all the naughty details and sex we've come to expect from Fifth and we will learn a lot more about Allie's new found skills and desires. Looking forward to the next chapter!!

Great story! I really love how Allie has become addicted to black cock.

No blowjobs no cum shots, no real story, just hearing from Robert, very unmoving and worst of all not sexy. No story of the wife succumbing to his charm, nothing. Hannah’s character seems like an absolute dirtbag as does, frankly the entire cast. Why go through the trouble of the camera only to have it discovered? Just a away to make the story drag out, better be a real good finish or it’s an absolute bust Imo

Great build up! I can’t wait to read the next chapter about Robert and Allie spending the weekend together while Jack is camping with the kids.

I really like how Fifth Estate has developed the story up to now. It was pretty warm, fuzzy and fun in the first two parts, but turned a bit malevolent in part 3. It’ll be interesting to see if Fifth can pull this one out given the ugly direction it’s now headed. Turning the black dude into a manipulative, mean spirited cockmaster is getting pretty cliche, and takes away from the fun, playful nature of the story. I’m rooting for you Fifth.

Outstanding! One of the best stories in a long time. The next chapter has to be good with so much potential. Please don't keep us waiting too long!

Not quite how I thought things would develop. I had hoped for a big build up to the first time. That said, I'm certainly looking forward to the next chapter and see how you tell this tale.

Don't be put off by the negative comments (besides, they all seem to come from the same poster). Your story is great and it adds to the suspense when an episode only leads up to the main event. Please keep it up

Last episode with Hannah, Brock and Kristen was damn hot and I had expectations this will continue. But unfortunately it wasn’t. I like the mind blowing stuff but it was too much.

The FaceTime with Hannah, the connection to Robert, him do dining out about the spy cam… it was all too much. And we missed the best part - wenn Allie had her first experience and became weak. I feel cuckolded but no one told me afterwards 😂

This story is so hot! Can’t wait for the next part!

Don’t get me wrong you write well and I enjoy reading your stuff, but the switch in the power dynamic is all too cliche. Of course the contractor knew that the smoke detector was a spy came, of course he knew how to up grade it and ensure it was sending feed to the husband’s screen without any additional pairing needed, and of course this contractor would pause the feed at just the critical moment, and of course the wife would be ok with the contractor taking pics and video of her on his phone, and of course he has no scruples and will black mail the protagonist, and of course…. It’s the same silly plot where the husband loses control of everything. Sorry but this is where you lose me. The characters now become very One Dimensional and the story falls down the same path. You had such an opportunity to develop the characters. 5 stars, becomes 4 stars and 4 stars become 3 as we move into the realm of unoriginal and very predictable. Sad really.

Not as a good as the previous chapters, sadly. I felt this went too far into into the blackmail/cheating/deception direction then was expected from the first chapters. Like there was a thematic shift in the story you are trying to tell. Nonetheless, thanks for writing.

I liked this a lot, and I’m glad you are extending the series, Fifth! Hannah’s influence is a great added feature. Can’t wait for the next one!

Loving this story, stretch it out as much as you can, Robert is!

Thought this chapter was gonna be lit with good smoking content, but seems it feel slightly short. I hope the next round comes in strong. Jack needs to get the upper hand back on this ordeal he created, Robert seems to cocky now, and spoiled the masters plan on the cam block.. Jack should arrange a final meeting between them where he gets Robert to drain the vain and he downloads everything off his phone then does master erase on it. Roberts only left with the memory of Allie, not the content he thinks hes got.

Incredible chapter and story overall. Love it so much and I’m so pumped to read the next update. This has been one of the best IR/Cuckold stories I’ve read in a long time. It’s that good!

Only thing I’d ask for is maybe some sort of flashback to Allie and Robert’s first encounter and how that all went down instead of just being told it happened and that they’ve actually been at it for a while. Other than that, perfect! Keep it up!

And once more 5 stars, what else!

Great story - I gave you 5 stars just because I like cheating slut wives & girlfriends. I was really hoping there would’ve been a pregnancy risk. But oh well! I do wish if was more detailed from her side of things. Hopefully next chapter will be better.

I've enjoyed this story, you're a great Writer no doubt. My only complaints with this chapter are the blackmailing, and the spy-cam being taken over. It feels like the husband was curious and has now lost all control. He wants his wife to indulge, but now there's got to be a sick feeling in his stomach, knowing she HAS indulged. I think that's the main takeaway for me anyway. It leaves you feeling almost sick, but you want to keep reading.

I'm looking forward to the coming chapters.

Picked up some earnest erotic steam in Part 3, after dragging along a bit. Agree with one or two folks on the comments that more attention should be paid to the experience between Robert and Allie. Personally, I find the plight of the other chicks digging BBC a bit irrelevant to the main event being nice white wife turned BBC Queen. Also, Robert warned Jack that curiosity killed the cuck... A lot to build on for folks who dig the genre...

Finally, hoping we get the next installment of Cuckolds Anonymous soon... Be awhile?

The thing about these stories is that husband has a fantasy about his wife and takes steps to make it happen. In so doing, they think they are in control. Not so, as it is the wife who ends up controlling the action. What makes it exciting is knowing the train wreck that will wrest control from the husband and spin his life out of control. Here he has lost his wife who would never had really carried out sex out of marriage. She was blackened only because he put her at risk. Now it is too late and she will seek out black dicks whether he wants her to or not. The only thing about the story I regret was not feeling her fear and excitement as she was faced with temptation.

Liked the first two chapters...the third not so much. Dont really mind that hubby missed out on the first time action, but feel cheated that we the readers didnt get to experience it. This third chapter was frankly dull without it.

i hope we get the beginning of robert and allie in the next chapter

I don’t know what some of these other commenters read, but Fifth, this story rocks and this chapter was the best yet! I love that you put a little bastard in each of your main black male characters. Cole had it. Ced had it. Nick certainly had it. And Robert definitely has it! Can’t wait for chapter 4. Ignore the haters!

I could say a lot but will keep it short. It’s just wasn’t hot enough, none of the chapters. What’s hot about watching your wife fuck herself with a dildo to begin with? Major bummer didn’t give any stars and probably not gonna finish, I only did two chapters of Cuckhold anonymous and gave up on that as well

I'm hoping for a 4th and a 5th chapter to follow-up on these three. I hope the 4th chapter is told from her first-person perspective summarizing her growing interest/obsession and focusing on the contractor's seduction of her. 5th chapter should discuss the contractor's long weekend, and whatever, and whoever, is included.

Not going to lie… I felt frustrated like Jack’s by not hearing the details of how Robert took Allie and filled her over and over with his big black cock. Just enough details to tantalize and tease, but damn I can’t wait to read the next chapter!!!!

Great story!!!

@PervyHusband. I won’t give away C4 details, but I think anyone feeling that way should make sure they don’t miss reading the next chapter…

I thought Chapter 3 was a strong chapter, slightly better than 2 and as good as Chapter 1.

If I was writing this, I know what twist I put in (it is a big one).

It is good to see you have DukeLattimore onboard, he knows his stuff.

Like many here, I'm looking forward to Chapter 4.

What do I hope to see in the next chapter? As a female I would really like to have something of Allie's perspective in this story rather it be 100% told by the males involved. Yes, I used the term "male's" on purpose rather than men. I think both have a failing in the "man" department. Neither look on Allie as anything other than an object. I find this problematic considering nothing about this story would have been possible were it not for Allie's interest in big black cock. I get that the husband wants to see his wife satisfied in a way that he never can. I get that the contractor is just a dog that wants to fuck any attractive woman that he can. What I think i missing is Allie's perspective on how this entire situation has changed her. Just my .02 cent's.

Thank you again for a great chapter. Jack certainly didn’t see that coming and when he realised that the video feed had been paused it was only then did he realise what a black cock loving slut Allie had become but without him knowing. I would love it if Allie could admit to Jack what she has become and while making sure Jack knows how much she loves him she has to admit that she loves big black cock too and is a slut for it and can’t get enough of it. For Jack’s part he must become a willing cuckold and encourage Allie to get all the BBC she needs includes Brooks. Can’t wait for chapter 4

I usually dislike the concept of a willing cuckold in these stories but here you did it in such an interesting way. I think the truth could have been teased a little more, to raise that anticipation as high as it could go. But that's just personal opinion. Good job.

This is such a great story. Love the slow burn. Can't wait for Chapter 4. Don't make us wait too long!

The pacing of the first two was spot on. Ch 3 was good but a little off the pace imp. Hoping ch4 can bring things back on course

Love the story!! Hope it shows how he loves what is happening and she goes on to own it and have fun with the friends bull also!!!

Please, please, please write out the bits of Allie's first four hours with Robert and how it went. And some insights into the following weeks. God, I need to know how she got it on.

Lol I gotta say, when Jack said, he left with a raging hard on and a 40 bill for me to pay, I thought how, Robert should have just told Jack to suck his dick, I would have love that

Please, allow us to read about the first 4 hours of Al's and Robert's encounter. I wish to know how badly it went down.

I'm loving the story so far. Hopefully we get to read more about the first hours of Al's first encounter, maybe from her POV that would be so hot

Great story! I am looking forward to the unplanned fourth chapter after the build up in chapter 3. It’s sad people can’t stand behind their comments when they make negative comments anonymously. They need to grow up.

You turned a hot story into a piece of shit

This is a great story. Please keep it coming.

You are amazing writer. Good work dude.

Eagerly awaiting the next part. Any rough ideas when it'll be ready??

Wow, so good. I am thinking of a sneaky way of sharing this story with my wife!

This has been great so far! Looking forward to more...

Robert should get her a few more videos to watch and say you should watch them with your husband, and have them be videos of black men fucking white wives but with the husbands sucking black cocks clean and eating cum from the wife's pussy, and getting ass fucked with their wives watching.

Great writer , great Story. Anyone leaving negative comments on this are lazy wankers (literally)

Hopefully, the next part has actual footage of the deed.

Please, don't make any longer with this story, It's incredible how a very good and promising writer ended up writing a regular loving wife story, just like any other in this site, is a step backwards for your amazing work. This last one has a lot of inconsistens, starting with all the blackmailing, it doesn't have any sense that Robert blackmailed Jack, and here is why I believe that, Robert seems like a regular black male, with a good and profitable job, not always need to write the black male as a bad guy, with all the plotting against Jack, in this scenario you could give a different direction for Robert, maybe according with Jack's idea and fully committed to participate, and for blackmailing, if Jack already gives Robert permission to seduce his wife, Robert doesn't need to obligate Jack to allow to fuck his wife every time he wants, could be worked better without the blackmail, first with Robert describing the matting and then introducing slowly Jack's participation. As a said, it looks like a few stories that I already read previously in the loving wife category, and, at least for me, doesn't work.

Checking daily for an update on here! I like the previously suggested idea of Jack somehow getting his hands on the footage of the original seductions

When can we expect a continuation of this story?

It’s been 🔥🔥🔥 thus far. ✌️

come on my friend I am getting very anxious for the continuation of this yarn have read the last chapter many times just want more from one of the best authors on the site.

don't take too long

The next chapter of this fantastic story would be a wonderful early Christmas present for me and your many followers. I'm anticipating this as much as Jack is! I'm hoping for as much detail as you gave us in the Wardens Wife story!

A great stores but it be a lot better if the stores had a bit more about Allie 4hr on the first date

Can there be more sex where Allie Bradshaw tells the truth of what happened in the first 4hrs ot her trip into bigcockbully.

This one just goes in a completely unexpected way, one that I enjoyed more than I was expecting.

Keeping checking everyday for the anticipated next chapter

Hopefully done soon

Cmon man don’t leave us hangin. ThAT Is fUCKING hot as fuck!!!!

My wife and I would absolutely love a part 4, the hottest part is hearin the details of her finally submitting to what she knows she needs!

I love 💖 this,Allie is having a good time with her big black dildo, Now Robert giving her a big black cock for real she is going to be a Gower. Can we please have the fourth episode soon waiting to find out what the camera reveals

Part 4 is gonna be so good I think!! Hopefully he gets to taste the aftermath of his actions

Please can you put more sex coming into Allie and Robert giving her his 9.1/5. In images of his large penis and more information on her first four hours in the beginning of her full in to big black cock for real

Hopefully a stocking stuffer soon.

The hot wife in black stockings, garters and high heels. Legs up spread wide and getting stuffed with some big fat contractor bbc till she’s ozzing a big ol creame pie for hub to have as dessert

Der editor is there any chance of finding out when chapter 4 of Elise Robert and Paul old jacks finding out if Alice is going to be in pragnated bye the contractors big black cock

Please please continue! Would love to see her pregnant with a set of black twin boys.

Definitely needs to get knocked up with a pair of black twins. Great job so far!

great series! highly recommend

I love this series and hope you get to next part soon and put some hot sex in it

Will there be a Chapter 4?

I agree will there be a chapter 4? Seamus to be a long time coming?

Loved it hope there will be a chapter 4 from his wife’s perspective. Very fucking hot!!!

There will absolutely be a chapter 4. I’ve just had a lot of real life stuff going on and haven’t been able to commit as much time as I anticipated. I hope you remain patient, I’m confident it’ll be worth the wait.

I'm starting to think "Fifth Estate" is an AKA for Hank Moody! Maybe you need a muse of sorts to remedy your writers block! Seriously, you write some truly erotic stuff in the IR niche and like many here, once engaged in your concepts, I remain encouraged and motivated to check back regularly to see if the spirit moved you to finish works in progress you stated were soon to come. All due respect, these are not novels!

Moreover, be honored folks come to a site like this no less and take the time to continue to follow you in these periods between content. Personally, I'm still waiting for Cuckolds Anonymous! Keep in mind, folks that come here hoping you drop new content have 'real lives" as well. Be thankful you have cultivated a following of sorts given your talent or ability to spin this fetish. Looking forward to completion of this and CA... Thanks, and get to work! :-)

What a great last comment by anonymous, calling out not just Fifth but all authors who may take their base for granted. Frankly I’ve been disappointed with most of any thing I’ve read recently, not just this story but all others. As you are waiting for Cuck anoymous I and many of us have waited for the Bull pen, I’ve given up for it’s been over 3 years now. Things do come up both in our authors lives and their readers, personally I’m gonna try to stay away from Literitica and this story both

I really wrestled with whether to respond to these last two Anonymous comments, but eventually I couldn't help myself--just remember if you hadn't complained about the fact I don't work hard enough on my Lit stories, I could actually be working on the ones you desire instead of typing this right now. And to suggest I take my reader base for granted is a bunch of bullshit. Do you know why my library is littered with so many Red-H's? It's because I care enough about my readers to not publish crap stories like those that clog up the new story page everyday. I could bust out 6,000 word strokers filled with typo's and grammatical land mines, but that's not who I am or what I do.

I try to make every story worth the reader's time. Do I always achieve it? No. But at least I always feel good about the effort I invested. Some writer's write fast and some don't. I don't. And you know what, that isn't always a bad thing. I can't tell you how many quality elements have made it into my stories because a new idea, setting, or character popped into my brain that never would have if I busted out every story one after another. Also, the further each story progresses, the more influence from reader's I take into consideration. When chapter 4 of Wife's Black Dildo publishes, it will look very different from the chapter/story I envisioned when I started.

As for the length of time between chapters, no I don't like the fact that chapter 4 of Cuckolds Anonymous was written three years ago and C5 is still not complete, but sometimes authors' creative juices flow in other directions. But to imply I am different than other popular writers in this category or probably in Lit as whole in terms of lag lengths between stories, is also BS. Everyonesavoyeur, j267, Cockhole, Stormbringer and others all have had significant publishing gaps in many of their IR series stories. No one loves it, but you know what, complaining on these comment boards isn't going to change a fucking thing.

To the editor the stories of the wife's black dildo the last three episodes were absolutely brilliant and I am looking forward to number four where Alice and Robert get busy making Jack looking on in envy of what Robert is doing to his wife in his bed making his headboard hit hard on the bedroom wall, Robert doing he's at most to make her pregnant with his black baby making Jack sorry for what he put into progress hoping the fourth one gets you soon

Well said Fifth. The loud minority seem to forget that they are lucky enough to get such high quality tailored content for FREE.

I hope you don't think the loud minority of a reflection of the majority of your fan base. Personally I wouldn't blame you for just removing their overly negative comments that have no bearing the on actual story itself

Ugh, hate to be another one of those annoying readers that’s begging for the next chapter, but holy shit I need the 4th installment of this story like a crack addict! But of course, update whenever you can. The wait will be more than worth it I’m sure!

Totally agree with the point that we have a loud minority of comments from people who do not create on here but expect everything they want. It is frustrating as Fifth is superb and shouldn’t need to explain the obvious. I’d suggest the moaners go somewhere less creative. This story is fascinating chapter 3 was superb and I agree with those that are interested in the female perspective etc but do you know what? More than anything I am grateful for Fifths work and his story, it is his story and I am grateful for him telling it.

Some people on here need to quit complaining and appreciate the small percentage of top flight authors on here that really take pride in their work and turn out A+ products time after time. I can't imagine the amount of work that goes into a story of the amount of detail that Fifth puts into each one. Be patient, if you want a quick two page mediocre story, go find another author. For those of us who can be patient and await the next great story, we appreciate your work Fifth.

I hadn't had time to read much lately so the first chance I had the time to I looked for the newest story from one of my favorite authors FifthEstate . I knew that I wouldn't be disappointed and I wasn't , this is another wonderful story full of the little details that set this writers style apart form others . I hope as the story continues we get a chapter of the actual encounter between Allie and robert from the first time he takes her ( please !) anyway I love so far another great effort Thank You

Virtually everything I have read from Fifth has been exceptional. I presume ‘those two comments’ were just trolls as the content is laughable. Look forward to chapter 4 whenever you can and please keep going in whatever direction you feel like - it’s worked so far!

so amazing to read. thank you!

Can’t wait for part 4!

One of the best stories written

Can't wait for part 4..

Thank you for you work. It is appreciated by many.