by Vanessa_Rose_Secrets
So real quick, male, 57, bi. Loved the stories parts 1 and 2. Hoping 3 is Cumming soon !
I think the incest is between parents. Grandfathers picture on wall is hint. Good story so far. I’m a man. Not sure women read any of these stories lol.
Thanks everyone for enjoying my story - if you'd like to support my work feel free to send me a tip ;) ko-fi.com/thevanessarose
Would love to see more with the dad.. maybe the introduction of bf and his dad? Some dp action leading to first time anal play?
Too Many Grammatical Error to make pleasant reading. You need to work on that .... a lot.
Get an Editor with at least a BA in English.
oh yeah, this needs to be continued for sure. So many story lines to explore here. Keep an eye on grammar and spelling to guarantee a great reading experience. Anxiously waiting for more chapters to come (or cum ;) )
I truly loved reading this story. But I do agree with "rcrehv" your grammar definitely needs attention. And you must continue with the story!!!!!! I'm hoping there will be a little "lesbian" in it with Daniel's mom?