by maxpotter
There is no reason to continue serving them. What are Zane and Mike going to do? What’s the absolute, fucking worst they can do? Nothing. Not a fucking thing if they don’t want to go to jail.
So why in the goddamn, dog raping FUCK isn’t the protagonist calling them out?
He hates then, fine. Do something other than being a punching bag. I’m tired of the same old bullshit chapter after chapter after chapter.
It’s like Groundhog Day in story form. It’s the same frustrating bullshit every time you writeX
Now, I don’t know what this guy did to you. Maybe he fucked your wife. Maybe he fucked your daughter, hell, maybe he fucked your dog. I don’t know, and at this point, I couldn’t care less if he did. I just want it to end.
This is the best one of the series so far. I love everything about it and where the story is headed. Please write another soon.
You should consider making a sequel where the slave protagonist finds a way out, somehow takes control of everyone who's wronged him, uses and humiliates them, and finally takes back his life.
Please never stop this story! It‘s amazing!
Great Idea would be for the slave to get out of this control and take revenge on everyone like some other person saud!
I'm with the previous poster. I would love to see Marc find a way out or like in your other story other Doms find out about Chris's abuse of his slave. I don't know if I would give marc back his life in full but to see the other Doms take Chris out.
Love this story one of my favorites on here and I love the sequel story idea as well
Please please let Marc have a redemption arc. I love seeing him so humiliated but he really needs a win.
Es fantástico. Tal y como está.. No hay que cambiar nada... Solo elevar los grados de humillacion, más y más.. Hasta que devenga una simple puta y esclavo por voluntad propia
Awe guessing this is over really hope not really hoping for more this was truly an amazing story
very hot stories but starting to get a bit repetitive... would be fun if he found a way out and turned Zack and Zane into his slaves, mind controlling them as well