All Comments on 'I Hope He Didn't See Me Ch. 03 - Conclusion'

Great ending to the story.

I just read all three chapters of this ***** story at one time. It had a much uninterrupted flow that way. This was a little sick, a little twisted and a whole lot of HOT. Growing up I always wished I'd had an older brother for exactly this reason. You gave this story the perfect ending by showing that the asshole behavior of the older brother was actually roll play. This way both brothers get to play the Dom and sub rolls they each crave. Sorry that this is only three chapters long, it could have easily been more. MLF

actually 15 yrs?

What a freaking thrill to read a conclusion that was 15 years in the making! The song is creative genius and made me laugh out loud. Definitely didn’t see that sweet ending coming (ha!). Your writing has definitely evolved over time. Love all of your new stories but I was following before they posted. You made my day Kent100!