by CockSparrow
Ahh, very nice. Such a simple story but so well done. I do admire the pacing and characterisation, and the way you brought your narrator and Sandy so plausibly to the climax. Very arousing.
*****That was a cool read. Very believable story food and wine will do it!!!!! Thanks for sharing.
That is how you should write a story. Get rid of the remaining typos and you have the perfect read.