by dreamofyou
Five stars, wonderfully written, very detailed and graphic. Hopefully there will be more chapters involving Jill and maybe, just maybe he'll get double teamed by both Jill and Ashley.
This is the kind of story I relish! Thanks, you have a very good talent as a writer. I find your characters well developed and believable. So many who want to be writers must have never to listen to their English teachers and don't have the sense to use spell check. I'm really enjoying the story. You have developed the story line well and have created a vivid believable mental image of characters. 5 stars!
Love the theme of Jill wanting to serve her Lord. Hope you explore that more deeply in future chapters. Hot as hell!