by thebobber326
I would love to read more of this, I think it has so much potential. Loved the dirty talk off her.
I planned to make this a one off story but if I get a good enough idea for a sequel, I'll gladly make another.
I loved it, and a second "friend" would have been a great addition. Maybe for a sequel or a part 2, maybe even a couple of "friends". :-) Especially since she enjoyed it so much. :grin:
I gave it 5 stars, and put it in my favorites.
Great story. Many women like me have rape fantasies. But reality is dangerous so I love reading such fantasy stories. Please write more.
Other than a few things, overall a good read. I'd suggest an editor. Keep writing, I'll keep reading.
i am a retired sissy and I, too, have entertained fantasies of being raped --- even gang-raped into a state where I beg for more...Does anyone else share such nasty thoughts?
This was really good.
One slight change I personally would have made would be that at the last second, she chickens out a little.
She might realize how dangerous she's being, in the face of a real, live, threatening rapist. And then she's torn between her desire for pleasure and the fear of her attacker. That mental turmoil is what I absolutely LOVE in noncon stories.
Just the same, what you wrote was pretty dang hot. 5*
Woe, this had the potential to be "The Perfect Story" for me, but somehow felt a bit rushed, To me? At this point I can't even tell you what I might have changed, to make this "My Perfect Story." I'm truly not certain what I might change. Perhaps hearing more of the Victim's Thoughts as the story and action progressed.
Thank You "thebobber326." I look forward to reading you again soon. Cheers.
Terrific! You really had me hooked on how this would end. It ended really great. I love the no-nonsense description and the lack of distracting plot and character... What I call "pure erotica."
Pretty hot but I agree with the guy that said if the girl would have started thinking of the dangers and wanted to back out the last minute so it could actually rape a big turn on for me is like in a blackmail scenario the girl not wanting it and having whats happening but as the situation progresses her body starts to respond even though she is disgusted by the acts happening to her but the longer it goes on the more her body responds and without wanting to it brings her to a mind blowing orgasm while trying her best to fight it and getting mad at her body for betraying her