All Comments on 'I Want You'

by Ashson

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 3 years ago

Your story is a great reluctance story (rather than non-consent) and I felt as if I got to know, at least a little, the characters. One of your best, I'd say -- not that I've read so many of your stories that I can say that with confidence. Anyway, what I feel I can say, is that it is a great story, something wonderful to wake up to, and thank you. ~~ JBE

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 3 years ago
Clearly "No" Means "Unless No, Unless the Half-hearted Denial Isn't Heated. In Which Case the possibility of "Defacto Consent Comes Into" Play "

This story reminded me of a snippet from the classic novel 'Lonesome Dove'. A man who wouldn't cheat for a poke don't want one bad enough. --Augustus "Gus" McCrae.

Ergo the obvious score

Full marks *****

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
????

It's a mortise and tenon joint, not a tongue and groove. Do your homework.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 3 years ago

This was a good one too. I like that you spent more time on character development. Well done.

ScoratScoratover 3 years ago
Yum

Wow. Short and to the point and she was wearing yoga pants. You really know how to get my attention!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
¨???? It's a mortise and tenon joint, not a tongue and groove. Do your homework.¨

you´re correct.

tongue and groove would be in the ¨Lesbian Sex¨ category.

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