All Comments on 'I Wasn't The Only One'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Not bad.

Sex was hot and doing it in Sara's room was a nice twist. Good job

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

All too rarely does someone come up with an innovative story line. You have, congratulations.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Interesting idea and I really enjoyed it. Stephanie and our "not creepy" narrator were hot together. Hope to read more!

Ron-SanRon-Sanover 11 years ago
Well done.

Looking forward to more. Very nice start.

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