All Comments on 'I Watched You, You Watch Me'

by Mischievious14u

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

WOW !

Great story writing.

Djmac1031Djmac1031over 2 years ago

You're doing a sequel I hope?

ballfan2001ballfan2001over 2 years ago

Lot's more of these three please. So good.

HectorBidonHectorBidonover 2 years ago

Nice story. Believable characters, believable actions, very sexy. I liked it that the two women had their bond, and the couple had their bond, and they managed to get together in a way that respected both of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More please!

SirKevinSirKevinover 2 years ago

Hopefully, this is just chapter 1. I agree with Hector, I really appreciate that the author took the time to bring up the sexy times and perspectives that lets the audience know that everybody's being respected.

Mischievious14uMischievious14uover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the positive thoughts. I will be following this up with part 2

KlitomaticKlitomaticover 2 years ago

Very Hot, seems you might have had a little experience.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story, one oopsie - Melissa is there also?

Mischievious14uMischievious14uabout 2 years agoAuthor

Nice catch! Didn’t see that

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good premise.

But sex scenes lack needed details.

And dialog about what's going on while it's happening.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Excellent and believable, "he moved from her nipple down to her hairy pussy." I hope this does not turn into a shaved lady's series. I rated this one a five because of the hairy pussy.

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Experienced guy that is well travelled with many interesting experiences to share. I enjoy reading the truthful experiences of others and sharing mine, though the fantasies can help find a new adventure.

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