by Mischievious14u
Nice story. Believable characters, believable actions, very sexy. I liked it that the two women had their bond, and the couple had their bond, and they managed to get together in a way that respected both of them.
Hopefully, this is just chapter 1. I agree with Hector, I really appreciate that the author took the time to bring up the sexy times and perspectives that lets the audience know that everybody's being respected.
Thanks for the positive thoughts. I will be following this up with part 2
Good premise.
But sex scenes lack needed details.
And dialog about what's going on while it's happening.
Three stars.
Excellent and believable, "he moved from her nipple down to her hairy pussy." I hope this does not turn into a shaved lady's series. I rated this one a five because of the hairy pussy.