by mrPIT
Loved it.... Can’t wait for another installment. Please keep them coming.
I really like the idea of the reciprocal wish. Makes it lot more fun to read then the usual "I can do anything I want and the genie has to obey him"-stories.
I loved everything about it. Not only thoughtful but allows for almost infinite possibilities and directions from here. Can’t wait to read more.
If there's one thing that irritates me it's single page installments to a really good story. 😒 I'm going to give you a 5/5 even though I should be taking points off for your brevity.
Great concept, nice execution. I know stories often rush into conflicts, but a little fantasy of happiness is welcome!