All Comments on 'IA: Ari Rescues Gabby from Stables?'

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

This is really good. Are you going to continue? Will Ari become a pony girl too? hour-for-hour?

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Keep up the good work... interested in seeing where this goes...

rose362436rose3624368 months agoAuthor

Thank you. I have new chapter ready. I will add it in a few days.

Your comments keep me going - so thank you again

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Pleas keep up the good work. This story has so much going for it I can't wait for the next chapter

Mynt_ElevenMynt_Eleven2 months ago

Amazing entry to this series. I’m loving the buildup, and the foreshadowing. It all feels like a window into events yet to come.

I’m anxious to see what the goblins have planned for our two heroines. I’m also curious to see if Gabby’s plans have been on track, or if they will all be derailed.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissy2 months ago

The goblin has to be a simple minded creature as you painted them or will we discover the real goblin force in the morning? ….. strawberry is like a filly and the mind breaking conditioning already overrides the ‚human‘ being ‚mark territory ‚ ….. this sounds interesting …. Is the mission in danger ⚠️ …. Or can they play along with the goblins or can the goblins break they minds totally ….. and what about human male ponies with chastity cages and plug horse tail

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** Apr 2024 ** Revision to my first published story "IA: Ari Finds Gabby - a Ponygirl?" was rejected. Not sure why. All I did was fix a few grammar issues. Not sure what I missed. Anyway, I will try again. ** Mar 2024 ** Next chapter has been published. Do let me know your t...