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Click hereNah. Fuck that.
It was still on my mind as I walked into the natatorium to take my seat for the swim meet. As usual, I immediately turned my head to find Ian.
He was in the corner wearing his skimpy little speedo suit, talking in a secretive sort of way with someone. I couldn't tell who it was since the other guy was turned away from me and was wearing a swim cap. Those guys all tend to look the same.
Ian had his arm extended and the other person was doing something... doing something to his wrist. The other person leaned in closer to the side of Ian's face and tilted enough towards me that I saw him.
It was Brian.
And I stood there, unable to do anything but watch as Brian unhooked the bracelet from Ian's wrist and tossed it casually into the corner behind Ian.
I saw red.
The loud slam of a door echoed through the halls as I turned around.
I didn't know where the hell my feet were taking me but I knew I was doing something I had never done before.
I ran the fuck away.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 3 years agoThank you Gar28. I wasn't expecting this. Nice surprise. Keep writing, please.
Hutchison12about 3 years agoHearing Wes’ take on them is an unexpected and welcomed surprise thank you 😊
loverofbksover 3 years agoNo!!!!! Ian, how could you...lol I love this series. I can't wait to see how much ass kissing 💋 Ian has to do to fix this. 🤦♀️
JRSONover 3 years agoWow.. Great Chapter!
It looks like trouble in paradise! I was happy to see this unexpected 4th chapter! In my opinion it was the best one so far. It was good to see things from Wes point of view and learn so much more about who he actually is underneath that masculine gorgeous body! I don't think Ian knows him as well as he thinks he does quite yet! Even more it feels like Wes may be having to come to terms with some things about himself!
Things just got real! Wes might just have some buried insecurities or skeletons in his closet after all! Maybe he is not quite as confident a guy as he tries so hard to project to others! He has seemed kind of phony and a bit to full of himself most of the journey to me! And it bothered me that Ian cowered down to him, allowed him to be disrespectful, and come across as better than those around him. The cocky, arrogant, big dicked, stunning muscle jock just might not be as together as he seems! I think Ian is causing him to look harder at the person he actually is! He has definitely got him a bit off balance at this point!!
I did not enjoy discovering what an slutty, unfeeling, big dicked jerk Wes was sexually before getting with Ian! Maybe he needed to be taken down a couple of notches, and Ian seems to have just accomplished that without even realizing it!
These two are so hot and exciting together, I hope they can get past this huge misunderstanding (at least I hope that is all it ends up being) and come out the other side even closer and better together as a loving couple!
I'd love to see Brian get his Ass kicked for fucking around with this relationship, because it is intentional! But I doubt Ian would forgive Wes if it were to happen!
I find it strange that Ian would not make sure to remove the bracelet himself and secure it someplace safe, or at least handle it with much more care than allowing Brian to just pitch it in a corner! Maybe it does not mean the same thing to Ian it means to Wes! But it certainly should!
Instead of running away like a jealous little girl, Wes should have been a man, gone and retrieved the bracelet and maybe not given it back to him for a time! I can't picture Ian having any kind of feelings or interest in Brian other than friendship, but there is something going on that does not make sense! He is obviously in denial that Brian does not have some kind of interest in him in more than just a friend way, or maybe he just enjoys causing trouble between Ian and Wes! He is definitely up to no good! The green monster has reared its ugly face with Wes! I think the cocky self assured Wes maybe is not as completely secure as he likes to put on! Interesting development for sure! Great chapter... Please don't keep us waiting to long with this cliffhanger!
