by MixedPickles
It took awhile for the pictures to get sexy but when they did it was awesome.
4 stars from me.
Hot Story! This Mia character is a real sexy bitch - love her! The conversation is choppy at times but starting with fantasy leading to sex and planning it out is super hot. And then adding the daughter role playing as her mother (with read desire to see it happen) is a dream come true wife!!
Married barely a year and already looking forward to fucking around. Doesn't look like a love story.
What an amazing melange of text and graphics! And the illustrations are so plentiful!
MORE!!!!! I want to read where he does Sarah and his Mother in law, and she does Tom and her father!
Good fantasy, well told, have had similar conversations with my wife years back, never did anything about it, boosted our sex life though and no comebacks.
This is the second story of yours that I have read. I get so tied up in the storyline. I love the way you write. The quality of the images are the best I have ever seen and ad so much to the story and plot. Keep up the great work.
Well, again the best graphics and story I have read in a long time. The shading of the clothes and the expressions of the characters are stunning in their complexity and realism. Other illustrators need to take lessons on how to depict the characters and scenes in such a thoughtful and realistic way.
Story was OK but sounded like someone in their teens writing it. 'Boner' - adults don't use that term.