IaW Ch. 02: An Immodest Proposal

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It happened that night.

It wasn't right away. After I proposed, and she accepted, we were still in a kind of emotional shock. In our second date and we were still unpacking each other's emotional baggage - and boom.

I had no intention on going home that night, but I didn't set out to have sex, either. I just wanted to squeeze this red-haired nymph as close as I could.

We actually watched another movie after that emotional roller coaster. Didn't need drinks, didn't need talk, didn't need much, really - just touch. Her whole body was pressed against mine.

There was something different about this wavelength. This wasn't heat, this was warmth. It was a deep vibration that felt like it was passing from my bones to my soul.

After the last movie finished, the classic Curse of the Mummy, we sat in silence for a while, in the dark.

She pulled me to her bedroom, and kissed me, and pulled me into bed.

I kissed her, and squeezed her and caressed her - but mostly, I held on to her. I wrapped her in my arms, spooning, and kept her tight, claiming her, protecting her.

There was moisture on my arm and I realized she was crying.

I buried my nose in her hair and whispered: "I love you."

There were little tremors in her breath, silent sobs as she cried. She was quiet until she could steady her breath. "I love you, too."

We actually fell asleep like that. I don't know how long, all I know was that I woke in exactly the same position with the exception that my dick inconveniently woke before I did.

Maybe it was because she was adjusting against me, and holy god, that body would bring life to the dead.

She reached behind her, between us, and caressed him.

Naturally, he answered her call.

The caress turned into gentle strokes until she whispered over her shoulder. "I need you inside me. Please..."

I reached between her lithe legs and felt real heat radiating from her body. I dipped a finger between her folds and found how wet she was.

With my fingers parting her lips, her hand guided my shaft between her thighs. Under her direction, my tip nestled itself between her folds. With a slow push from my hips, I slid effortlessly into her.

Another push and I went deeper.

Another push and-

She moaned and inhaled, catching her breath.

I'd bottomed out, my dick burying itself as deep into her as a dick could go.

"Oh, my God," she sputtered.

I nodded. "You are so wet. You feel so good..."

We were sideways doggy-style, and she pressed her hips back against me. It kept me bottomed out, deep inside her.

I took a handful of those beautiful B-cups, and a handful of her slender hips, and started to work us into a rhythm.

The bed started squeaking and honestly, the sound was quaint.

I saw her silhouette in the dark. Between thrusts, I leaned in to kiss the back of her neck. "How is it you are so perfect?"

She flipped around, popping me out, and she was crying as she pulled my face to hers. Sure enough, my cheeks felt her tears as she pressed her lips to mine. "I love you... I love you, I love you, I love you!"

"I love you, too," I whispered. She was so much more than just 'beautiful,' but I didn't know how to say it beyond: "You are amazing..."

On her back, she splayed her legs wide, almost-gymnast style, then wrapped them around me. I didn't have to do a thing as she grabbed my shaft and guided it back inside her.

One thrust later and her eyes went from wide-open to squeezed shut. Her body tensed and she held her breath as an orgasm lit through her.

Feeling her convulse underneath me, feeling her sex squeezing my shaft, I couldn't hold back. I tightened right along with her and felt the rush.

I was coming deep inside her.

She tightened her legs around me, pulling her pelvis to mine, bottoming me out again. A breath later, she was milking me - and my body gave everything hers asked for.

I collapsed on top of her, using my elbows to keep from crushing her. It didn't matter, she was wrapped around me and pulled herself up, tightening her whole body against mine.

I adjusted, wrapping my arms around her.

Her voice was gravelly, holding back so much emotion. "Rick... I love you."

I kissed her ear. "Ginny... I love you."

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TatankaBillTatankaBillabout 1 year ago

Such a dirty girl. I love her.

All these bitches whining about story categories. Who gives a fuck? I LIKE the story. I couldn't give a shit less how it's labeled.

TatankaBillTatankaBillabout 4 years ago
Great story!

This is a lot of fun to read. I think the dialogue works well. It strikes me as a bit contrived and there's an air of "Tasters Choice Couple" sparring with innuendo and double entendre about it- but I'm enjoying that. (It's a LOT better written than those ads ever were, and a hell of a lot sexier.) She IS a hot mess and his armchair psychology is clearly self serving...but he put his money where his mouth is and committed to her, so all that is cool. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more. You get a five star rating from me and I'm gonna go back and rate the first chapter the same.

Thanks for this. It's erotic and exciting.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xabout 4 years ago

@Anonymous Re: "What the hell" - First, LW isn't a "neutral category," whatever that means, nor is it restricted to wives. The mods have long allowed fiancee and girlfriends. The ONLY requirement for LW is that the PRIMARY focus is the relationship between the man and the woman. There may be inter-racial incidents, there may be lesbian incidents, whatever. The KEY is that central focus is the man-woman relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Love the consensual sharing.

The "Loving Wives" category on Literotica is a cesspool populated by truly awful men. You are an exception. Please keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sheesh

Looks like you hit a nerve.

Never mind, quite enjoyed the story actually

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
What the hell

You must be a newbie writer because a writer on this site would know about the loving wife category and how it is a neutral category. But trying to put a exhibition category story into the loving wife category clearly makes you a complete and utter laughing stock . How do you not know that the loving wife category is a neutral category are you that dim or has that you have been writing in the exhibition category a lot . So since you want to be treated as a newbie writer I will let you know on why the loving wife category is neutral. The loving wife category has always been neutral because on this site there is nearly 90% of stories that contain loving wife in them . And if we put all them stories that contain loving wife in them into the loving wife category the site would probably crash. That is over nearly a million stories trying to shove into the loving wife category the site would probably be unusable that is why there are category’s. The loving wife category you can’t add another category into it that is why the category is a very tough category to write in. ( The funny thing is the site classes the loving wife category as swinging and sharing but they also put swinging as a group category) . But the biggest reason is that the readers of the loving wife category are very very proud and talented readers and writers that really hate writers that glorify cheating in any shape or form. From swinging to sharing they really really do hate writers glorifying cuckold stories. But they also don’t like writers that write garbage stories then presume that it must go into the loving wife category even though it clearly shows that it’s a different category story. But the biggest mistake you have done is the fact that you have just hidden your story away if you had put it in the correct category you would probably have more likes. But sadly all you will get is from “passing by” likes. In other words was just passing by and just noticed your story that’s all . Better still just keep writing in the exhibition category and leave the loving wife category alone. Then you wouldn’t have me trying to explain again to you about the loving wife category. Just please please don’t write ever again in the loving wife category you are just no good at it . You have got the whole of the other category’s to write in just leave the loving wife category alone.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
That's odd...

On the "Loving Wives" category description, it literally says "Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more..." Could some of these anonymous folk be compensating for their own guilty indulgence? Hmm...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
What don't you understand about LOVING WIVES?

These people aren't married. Why did you post this garbage here? NEVER start a story in one category and then change to another category. Horrible idea.

1 star

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 4 years ago

Coming to LW from other categories rarely works well.

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