All Comments on 'IaW Ch. 05: A Hard Day at the Office'

and flows nicely. It is a shame this isnt getting more views and comments. The comment re personal agency/slut shaming lets me know you are a liberal dick head so that taints it a bit.

This story is nicely written. Great flow, nice pacing, and intelligently written.

I hope you find your audience. You are talented.

Funny, crazy, sexy, intelligent. Brilliant fantasy shit. Love your work. Can’t wait to see how outrageous you take this.

Still hot. Still incredibly arousing. I don't want to use up all my metaphors in one comment and I don't want to abuse or overuse the old ones...this is hot like the second planet from the sun hot. Damn, I love this slut! What fun! I should have read more slowly since now I'm all caught up. Might just have to start over and read 'em all again.

This is pro quality. Smart dialogue, crazy characters, wild plot, the works. Much for us to learn, right here.