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"Boyfriend? Really Jason? In that case, I'll take a hug" said Mason. "'if you haven't already noticed, this group is very big on hugging." Paul reached out for Mason's hand but was brushed off as Mason went in for the hug. Grabbing him, he whispered in Paul's ear "please don't hurt him." Paul leaned in and whispered back "I promise you, I never want to hurt Jason."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous8 months agoAnon 8 months ago,
What are you even talking about? If you think you sound smart, then no, you sound like someone that is born with no brain.
I have never heard of fantasizing on somebody as a "pathetic and desperate" thing even if it is the first day. Besides, he's doing it in a private space, not literally doing it in front of everybody, now that is creepy, pathetic, and desperate.
Also, how in the world is that enough to make an assumption that he is pathetic just from that and immature? You need to get your head checked, because you are so out of touch with everything happening in the world, goodness me.
"Which is probably he got hurt in someone," now? Remind me how much of a judgemental ass you are. No, you're not being harsh, you're just being idiotic in toxic levels that I just want to vomit on your face because of how repulsive your entire comment is. Get a grip and introspect yourself because you are totally the model citizen here.
Anonymousover 1 year agoTbh I couldn’t finish reading the story. Jay was acting so desperate. He saw Paul once and immediately started fantasizing about him and jerked off in the bathroom like wtf 😬. I mean he just seemed very pathetic and desperate. It would be better if he waited at least two weeks to start acting the way he did. I mean he could find him attractive the first time he laid eyes on him but part one just put me off the story. Jay was so annoying, desperate and pathetic. Which is probably why he got hurt in college. I can’t imagine how much worse he would have been if he’s still so desperate now. Being immature and in college must have been a disaster. I know it’s just a story and I hope I’m not too harsh. Just an opinion. I like your writing style and the storyline but Jay needs to cool his head off. Both of them lol.
Sunnydaze361almost 2 years agoPart 1 was a great way to introduce Jay and Paul! I love the way the friendship is starting to grow and the vulnerability they both have! Looking forward to part 3 as Paul seems to have jumped in to Jason’s circle of friends and be his boyfriend much to Jason’s chagrin! There’s so much more to the characters and yet everyone has Jay’sbest interest at heart!
