All Comments on 'If Only I Could'

Please continue this story and make it a rescue!

Unfortunately it is not a rescue anonymous. Hal's life has been altered beyond most people's comprehension giving us his fullest service and sacrifice. The vast majority of us don't know how lucky we are

A very good story. I liked the humorous portrayal of Jim, a guy steered by his dick and his greed who shows a redeeming humanity at the end. Well done.

WOW Keith, this was really an emotional one. It took me a little while to compose myself before I could respond. This makes you stop and wonder just how many of our beautiful young men come back home damaged like this not only physically but mentally. I loved that you gave Jim an even bigger heart than his cock, that made for a great ending. This may have been sad and not the typical jackoff story here on Lit, but it was every bit a five-star story as it can get. Thanks for sharing this. MLF

A very good story. Distinct characters and a developed plot. This is a favorite.