by ValoryG
Really well done, in a unique tone. I kept waiting for some kind of covert manipulation to show up, and was so joyously shocked when it stayed true. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
A nice surprise to see this here today. The conclusion is very much in character with the rest of the story. You seem to have moved towards a very down to earth style and approach. It's interesting, and different from most of the stories to be found here.