All Comments on 'I'm a Slave Now? Pt. 04'

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Avonrep18Avonrep18over 3 years ago
Excellent

Just what I expected. Another fine chapter. Well worth the wait.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Did you not proof read before submitting? Normally minor mistakes don't bother me too much, its a free read. But there are some major mistake that cause a lot of confusion in this story.

MasterKGrayMasterKGrayover 3 years ago

This series has piqued my interest, I am completely captured. I can't wait to see how it ends. Does she give in to her slave side or go back to her normal life? More please.

TakeMeMasterTakeMeMasterover 3 years ago

Can't wait for the next room!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Great story. We love the plotting and pacing. Can't wait for the next installment. Great great stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I gave this story a 3, because of the many typos and other mistakes, that sometimes makes this story baffling. however, the subject is still captivating.

christi11christi11over 1 year ago

Very nice, thanks again. :)

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Glad to have the chance to write my odd stories. What I write isn't mainstream but I enjoy writing them for those that enjoy them. I love feedback and to share ideas that I have for future stories. Please know that I do like to experiment, so some stories will be very differen...

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