by creativeboyinspring
Did you not proof read before submitting? Normally minor mistakes don't bother me too much, its a free read. But there are some major mistake that cause a lot of confusion in this story.
This series has piqued my interest, I am completely captured. I can't wait to see how it ends. Does she give in to her slave side or go back to her normal life? More please.
Great story. We love the plotting and pacing. Can't wait for the next installment. Great great stuff.
I gave this story a 3, because of the many typos and other mistakes, that sometimes makes this story baffling. however, the subject is still captivating.