by anomalos
Telling us the story is imaginary is right up there with the author's who insist that the story is true. Right up there in dumbness, that is.
Agree that no scoring was a good move.
"Anne" a sad thin-lipped substitute for the real thing.
More like an opening paragraph than a story. Thoroughly unlikable characters doing stupid things.
Please, give some more thought to developing your writing abilities, before putting your writing out for perusal. This needs A LOT of work.
No wonder you didn't want it scored, total waste of time reading this GARBAGE.
I think most likely f them are good. Some ar better than than others.i have a story to add but where do we add it
As long as they’re not hurtful or racist they’re fine with us. It adds excitement