All Comments on 'Impregnating Coworkers'

Good start and hope for more.

Great story ruined by hyper ejaculation. Eleven inches of meat strains credulity and so does inter uterine intercourse but inflating her to look four months preggers,,,too much,

OUTSTANDING!!! More please

Why do so many writers think that all, so called Gurl Cocks as well as male assailants have to have such preposterously long as well as monstrously thick phallouses ?

I simply have to laugh when some of those things are described as outrageously over sized fuck sticks, logs or giant pensises !

I know this is fantasy land. But come on people, lets think about some reality in a few things human.

Carly was said to be a virgin, yet there was no mention of her hymen being shredded by the massively oversized invader of her womanhood. LAUGHING, Laughing, laughing.

Yes !

This shit is that funny.

Great start! I look forward to reading more!!

Good, some spelling errors, but pretty good for just starting off.

Awesome story.

Also it's a futa story, ignore anyone poopooing the size, 90% of futa art operates with a 12 inch minimum for a reason, and it's because the vast majority of its fans find that compelling.

If the dick were any smaller I wouldn't bother reading it, and I'm not kidding. If anything, bump it up to 14 or 16. If we are getting cum inflation than her dick ought to be a real monster.

Can't wait for more.

omgwhat a greatstart to an affair that wil last

Being an old male, I have found rear mosrt writers that go futabring up the futa’s vagina area in their and this guts must have balls the size of tangerines. Also wonder how Jade made it thru high school with a 12 inch cock and no one noticed. Hope there are a few sequels.

Welcome to writing. I would say good start and like your ideas. This site has volunteers who can help you with editing. Keep writing.

Real good start! Only once did Jade become Jude, but a very good first start.

Ok... Apart from issues with biology.. and by that I don't mean the dick

After several record-breaking "O"s? Jade is part of my real name. What a delight reading this. I'm more like Carly though. 5'6" 130 with 8x6 inch uncut totally faggot cock! My first cock up my faggot pussy was a 10.5" very very THICK!!! BBC! The owner, lol, was a tgirl I met coming out of a store in downtown S.F.. There were about 6 or 7 tgirls/cisgirls hanging out in front. This one saw me cumming up the slope and zeroed in on me when I came out, lol. Next thing I knew we were in my van and she'd laid out some sleeping bags/blankets on the floor while I sat in the drivers seat. She called me over to get down on all fours facing the front and believe it or not I had NO IDEA that she was a tgirl! I just thought she was going to do something kinki like shove a dildo from her purse up my faggot shelleyness first or something! I didn't think more about it until I felt the searing pain of the lips of my shelleytwat ripping apart! I cried out in pain! She was very comforting as she stayed inside of me. Convinced that it was OK. She continue her BBCs journey up my tight fagshelleyness. I fucking moaned, groaned, shrieked and screamed like a lil schoolgirl as that big fucking monster BBC FORCED! it's way toward the heart and soul of my fagshelleyness ~ It was about then that I realized her 6'4" athletic bod was actually tgirl. I was instantly turned on beyond belief as I looked at the sharp contrast of her satin black smooth skin against my faglilywhite fagslut glowing skin. As I felt her strong grip on my thin girlyhips I begged her to FUCK ME ...STUPID!!! FUCK ME PREGNANT! Lover ~ I heard myself say. I could hardly believe that was me shouting that out! In my van in the middle of downtown S.F.. It was only obvious that the bunches of passersby could hear it all and even see some of it! It was that day as she baptized my faggot womb that I became "shelleyfagslut!!!" Been living it ever since! With SOooo! much sweet loving faggot PRIDE! lovers ~

It has an interesting premise. Some cursory research into how sex works for biological females and more honesty about how women think and behave would have been easy but substantial improvements though. For reference, the penis -never- makes it past the cervix. You can't flood the fallopian tubes with cum. Likelihood of pregnancy during penetrative sex is never out of mind for even the most sex crazed woman.

I really wanted to like this, but the anatomical inaccuracy killed a lot of the enjoyment I derived from this story. Hope things get better.

That was hot, I love a good futa story.

Please learn anatomy. For some women getting hit in the cervix is equivalent to a dude getting punched in the balls. The cervix never opens except during delivery and even that is pretty painful. I get the fantasy aspect but the cervix stuff always comes off like testicular torture.