All Comments on 'Impregnating the Galaxy Ch. 02'

I'm glad to see you are doing well with this story. I enjoyed reading this chapter. I still see some word problems, but it did not take away from the story. It seems that you can have this story go in many different ways or directions. We will see what your mind can come up with. 5 stars for your efforts. Thanks for your time and imagination.

So why did they have a male population problem when they could have left at any time to find more? Hell all they had to do was visit a few planets or stations and spread rumors of valuable minerals or resources, and you'd have guys flooding the planet. Especially when they found out there was only women living on that planet. Maybe have their spaceship missing a key component, so they could only repair it with Dorians escape pod.

The only male on a planet of beautiful , horny women and he jumps on a ship and leaves, Huh. He might of knocked off a hundred or so before going off exploring.

He swore he wouldn't actually fuck any of the women in their pussies to his wife, the queen. Blowjobs and handjobs are alright, but if he wanted to fuck, it would have to be off-world. So he went off-world.

How does he know how to fly a 200 year old spaceship? This story has so many plot holes

Odd that he would leave his wife while she's pregnant.

Grammar is a little better, but good golly the plot holes and continuity issues.

If this wasn't just porn, nobody would still be reading.