All Comments on 'In a Dark Theater'

You are such a gifted writer. Your attention to detail is perfect. You can switch from erotic to nasty so easily. I really look forward to chapter 2.

Excellent story. It was great that she came away from it desperate for more!

Love it. Please write more. I want grandpa to get all four girls pregnant.

Incredible! I hope the old man gets a taste of the others!

Would’ve been hot if it was a setup and as they drive by Grandpa’s pickup, Nicole sees grandma’s head bobbing up and down slurping her juices off of his cock. Grandpa should take the girls one by one.

I enjoyed the story, would have liked some words from the old man and maybe describe his orgasm but great beginning!

Nice flow

Nice and wholesome!

Sensational. I shouldn't be excited but I am.

Would just like to add, there is no 'thin membrane' in the vagina - nothing is broken the first time you have sex. If there was, it would have broken whenever a girl/woman put in a tampon on her period.

another 5 star story, buildup was great and situation was hot. looking forward to more of grandpa/nicole or the other girls :) keep it up, you're my favorite author on here

Very exciting,storie. Please, more, from Grandpa and Nicole.Its necessary

next part pls

A marvelous story! Would love to see another chapter!

I hope you continue the story

Absolutely Hot!

Many will hate it; but, it truly is sex at it's finest.

That was hot and exciting . I'm hoping for more

Be careful of details. It's a challenge for most to 'bite her lower lip' while 'feeling his tongue in her mouth'.

Very hot

Awesome story!! It had me hard and horny from the start. I’m glad the old man bred her and came inside her. I can’t wait to re more of your stories! Great job!

great story