All Comments on 'In Absentia: Two Anniversaries'

Sorry, just not believable that she could confess adultery to her husband, twice, and he simply would not talk about it. Not even to express outrage, not even to hear her discontent and justifications. Even if he were involved with the Argentinian woman, a guy as controlling as Jack would have something to say about his wife’s behavior. The whole situation seems so… bloodless, so unemotional, so controlled, despite this wife’s intense frustration and dissatisfaction. Well written, though,

A single date on a calendar determines whether this woman is a wife, or a cum dumpster. Sad that her relationship existed on such a sliver of devotion, or this 'author' thinks anyone would put up with this bullshit.

Another story of an entitled self obsessed woman, this time married to a man she shouldn’t have married.

He may have not been what she wanted but for her to embarrass her husband, twice, by cheating with his colleagues says everything of her love and respect for her husband.

He wasn’t right for her, she wasn’t happy? She felt she deserved and was entitled to more? Fine, if he won’t agree to work on it, divorce and find some one more suited but no, she’s a painter. She needs him has a provider, to support her while she pisses around paining.

And to think telling her husband she’s cheated, in their bed no less and somehow believe he’s going to want to work on the relationship?

Heads up, he got colder and their life got worse because she cheated, shamed him at work and rubbed his nose in it. Maybe he didn’t rage, he quietly accepted the shame brought on him but he detached even more from the disgusting, skank he married.

Interesting, but the end of avaliable marriage for last is unpleasant

I couldn’t find one comment about the way this was written, everything was vitriolic unpleasantness about the woman. Let’s try to redress the balance a little. The story was well written and the characters were well developed. There was good understanding of their emotions and sexual needs, and there was a slightly bitter understanding of where her desires were taking her. The marriage wasn’t a good one, and that was made clear as the story developed. Overall a well constructed story with few errors - you don’t have to like the characters to recognise good writing.

Just another typical narcissistic, toxic feminist, supposedly empowered b**** who instead of having an honest dialogue with the man she's married with first she decides to spread for her legs for despite any Cock that comes by, and then she wants to talk afterwards with him, like he couldn't read the tea leaves already. And then this writer to make the female MC look a little bit more sympathetic has to also put in the plot about the husband having sex with some woman in Argentina just to get some sympathy points.

I am saddened to hear of the death of Amber while fucking not her husband. She especially liked maudlin sex up her ass while thinking politely of all the other people she would be fucking in the near distant future. She liked dull, unimaginative sex with no passion or spontaneity and little talking between the two boring partners. She died deserving the platitudes of her lost love and pathetic attempt at making her husband excited enough to come inside her the infrequent times she wasn’t too busy washing her hair or cleaning the jelly from between her toes. Surely, she will be remembered as the girl who couldn’t keep a man sexually satisfied if it wasn’t all about her needs. She was especially noted for fucking other men on anniversaries, holidays and other special days when her husband couldn’t be bothered snuggling up to an empty headed, cold woman. . . . As you may have guessed, I enjoyed this story about as much as listening to Emily Dickenson talk about why when-referee the passion of a lesbian relationship. She just didn’t care about them. So sad. MtM