All Comments on 'In An Angels Foot Steps Ch. 01'

You don't have to have sex in a chapter for it to be erotic...the characters are sexy enough....looking forward to the next chapter.

This was really well done. Can't wait to see more, and find out exactly who/what Gabe is (not that I don't have a little idea). I like the supporting characters like Ursula too.

There were a few distracting spelling errors, like mellow dramatic instead of melodramatic. Conscience instead of conscious. Other than that, I found it very interesting and enjoyable to read. Thank you for writing. I look forward to more.

Hi, cant',

I had seen those when I was going through it but obviously I missed them when the final edit was done.... sorry :)

I have very limted time to write anymore, so I'm trying to work as fast as possible and get distracted while editing.

I've made the corrections and the edited version should be posted soon. Thanks for the watchful eye!

~Shadow~

Cool premise, and well-executed despite a number of minor technical errors. I'm hoping the second chapter is as interesting.

Just one thing I have to note for the record, though: the first jeans were made in 1873. They didn't become popular with the general public until the 1950s. So somehow I don't think Gabe's been wearing them for centuries. :P