by RandyPanTheGoatBoy
A totally great fucking story and highly amused at the expense of your fiery cock head. Reminded me of an incident years ago when cooking supper for friends with my gf in my hetero days. I'd been handling chillies before handling her before our guests arrived. She spent the evening wiggling uncomfortably on her chair until it was blatantly noticed and we were forced to confess to huge laughter and drunken ribbing. Having moved over to the dark side I think my experience of taking my first really fat cock can't have felt that different. The sting was excruciating to start with and the burn seemed to last for 2 days!
@DevonCowboy: Thank you for your awesome compliments, I don't think I could expect a better all-round response after that. Anyway, a toast to the torturous hilarity of chilli burns, and to life on the dark side!
There are times when I'll start reading a story on here and for one reason or another, I'll get maybe a few paragraphs in, and think to myself, "Meh..." and hit the Back button n' bail because, well it's gonna end up the same way every other one does, the part with the sex. However, your story,...it kept my attention, the character interaction was well done,... What I'm trying to say is, I enjoyed your story and the way it was written. Maybe there's a possibility of a follow up story? Thank you & take care.
You are funny.
I do wish the story would continue. I always love a happy love story.
There was only 1 typo that I saw - kicked vs. licked. But no complaints from me.
Great writing!
@Scratchy505 I know what you mean, the same often happens to me, so this pleases me greatly. Honestly I planned on it being a one off but there will definitely be more stories in the same vein in future when I get the chance to sit down and concentrate, and when I've got the right fantasy fuel in mind.
Nicely written piece of erotica. Back in my youth I was so like Ash. I was a totally slutty bottom too. After a barber took my virginity. I couldn’t get enough cock up my ass. Your story is worth a hard 15 stars… 🤤
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Thanks @ShortyMac, it sounds like you were lucky enough to make the most of your sexuality in your youth lol
No no no!!! I'm gonna cry, they have to see each other again!
The story is brilliant, well written and cute, but I do not approve of that ending!
Randy…if I can call u Randy? That was a well thought out story and has the making of a PBS docudrama 🤔 Also, besides excellent writing and a clear grasp of the material… IT WAS HOT AS FUCK! 😊🫨😊 Really enjoyed the story as it was sexy, heartfelt and got Mr to full mast… look forward to reading and fantasizing more… More Sir, more please 😊 maybe for inspiration try one with beautiful 🦶🦶 (sorry, can’t find the right foot)😜 Bb Well