All Comments on 'In Brazil...'

Nice story. haha, an experienced lover is sometimes a ticket to paradise. I had a two-night fling at a business conference with a speckled gray man, sixteen years older but with one very thick cock, talk about anticipation.

Don't waste your time

People with white hair can't be hot?

Go do your homework and clean your room.

Well, I, for one, looooooove white hair and dirty old men, and I thought this story was a treat! An erotic and well-paced seduction on Jose-Luis's part, with each of his words and actions raising the stakes for Meredith and cranking up the heat for the reader. And the whole piece had a sensual, easygoing feel to it, just like I imagine Brazil to be. Nice job!

Can you explain why, when there are so many young, hot, good looking guys in Brazil, you had her hook up with an old man with white hair. A real turnoff.

I would have liked a little more in the beach scene and the days in between but very erotic build up for the last night.

I thought the start of the story was a little awkward… I wish I could tell you why. But the final seduction was very, very erotic!