All Comments on 'In Defense of Another'

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LudvigBlomSELudvigBlomSE5 months ago

Nice beginning of a story ;-) It's not a romance more a short erotic coupling. I won't rate it as to me it is unfinished specially in Romance. Good luck in the future.

lAnatomistelAnatomiste5 months ago

Sorry, but I can't like this.

There is simply no way any woman can recover from that level of trauma in such a short period of time.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Way too surreal, fakey, horrible experience and over-the-top BS.

When safely comforting and giving max TLC for a seriously physically and more so emotional injury; this was a poor and sad story of how to never respond or act to someone in need.

Think your imagination ran wild with your hopeful desires to someday somehow rescue a damsel in distress and be her forever hero!

This was not it and not the way. You should be ashamed of even thinking this is how to respond and treat anyone.

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