All Comments on 'In Dreams, Dominance Pt. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Yara kinda turned into Tara for a bit after the Barbarian Warlord dream...

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

You were mixing up Tara and Yara in quite a few sentences. Other than that, reading this chapter was quite troubling. Honestly it's revolting even, hopefully Barry won't get away with everything he had done.

dlj403dlj4038 months ago

Lots of typos in this chapter, but the most glaring was the switching between Tara and Yara

SomeoneblueSomeoneblue8 months agoAuthor

Apologies all for the typos. I thought I’d given this an additional edit… must have missed it. Again, sorry.

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