All Comments on 'In Goddess We Trust Ch. 02'

great texxt sure got me thinkin'. wish my wife did that

leaves the reader at the highest point of erotism. but it envisions one as if at the *cliffs of dover* of orgasm. and because it does feel as if unfullfilled, one realizes there is more to come. it's one thing to be teased as by flirting, but this tease is great for the imagination, it begs for more. loved the turn of events at the end. it commanded attention. nice follow up!!!!

The continuity well maintained from the first chapter as they continue their process of discovery. Showing them apart yet on parallel tracks as they contemplate the night's events. Both needing but unsure of what it is they need, only knowing that they need what's missing.

When next they meet I like the way she kept him off balance as she defines their roles. Especially liked the line:

"His cock was on fire from her masochistic attack; but its owner wanted more… MUCH MORE."

It says so much so innocently - its owner is WHO? And there their roles are defined. He trustingly submits; She exultantly triumphs.

Very well done.