All Comments on 'In His Dreams'

I think you left this story open to a follow up where he does get to watch (and join in) with mom and sis. Should be very interesting tale.

Very good, please continue with this story.

I like it. Don't stop now! Doesn't Harvey have another dream? One where both of his women are standing facing each other, both gently rubbing the other's swollen belly, smiling, with happy tears streaming down there faces? Just a thought. 5/5

Thanks for the comments. When I began the story I expected Harvey to wind up with both women, but a character's Free Will intervened -- Brenda absolutely refused to poach from her mom, given Fern's history, never mind Brenda and Harvey's mutual attraction. We thereby learn that Harvey's dreams of the future are not certainties. At this point I have no plans for a sequel but I do have some other stories in the works.

Kinda lame predictable story.

Not much detail...

Dreams rarely become real....

2 stars from me....

2 stars from me.

Exhibitionist mom would have shown herself way before & incest would gave occured....