All Comments on 'In His Eyes'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So good

Love your style

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
well conceived story

In His Eyes has a creepy ending (hence the genre it is placed in). That said, it is very well written, with some amazing love scenes. A horror story may not be for everyone, but this one is well above average. For those who wish to see just how good this author is, her Tannah saga is highly recommended. This author has a great ability to create great stories, and should definitely write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well that's one weird story! But it is an art to write something this weird so that it is logical in is own context.

I really do not know if I like this or not, but it is written well.

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