All Comments on 'In Over My Head Ch. 02'

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Another story that will never be finished..........

You should make a part 3.. I loved this

No, really. You Have to write more.

Okay, so, technically, you do not have to do any such thing, right. But this story series is so full of potential.

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Well, after taking a moment, let me just say that you should keep writing (preferably here on Lit). You've got some good story-telling talent. Really, this story-line is hot. The only suggestion I'd make is for you to try out some of the Lit editors to catch all those pesky homonyms and such.

Anyway, thanks for sharing (and please write more!).

I would like to see more written on these two. Good start for a series.

Loved it. Hope you'll write more. You have a great talent for it. Really liked that it seems like the beginning of a sexy romance.

Please please please will you write more, it's so hot! Really want to enjoy and see how this story pans out :)

A truly wonderful story, I hope to see more.

Very hot, love the character development. I feel this story has great potential, please keep going.

fantastic....character development good....story development great.......do keep it up....:)

Why is it always the amazing stories like this that keep us waiting please add more we are dying to fond out what happens next please finish.

u gotta write more but have some doggy style dominance goin on

Please more !!!

More please sir!

Leaving us up in the air, so cruel...

My god was that story good... The snowballing made me cum right at my desk

Your story had me so hard, that snowballing and when he took her cock into his mouth made me cum so hard!

More, more, more!

Keep it cumming! :D

i can't wait for more

More, more, more!

good start to a good story, look forward to the next one, had me hard the whole time

Chapter 3!!!! awesome story so far. Id like to see some apprehension, some conflict but overall very exciting.