All Comments on 'In The Beginning'

by RedExploring

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Mmmmmm... a Dom/Predatorial type

I like him!

I like him!

I like him!!!!

I knew a guy with this flavour. So good Red! xo

quietlarkquietlarkabout 4 years ago
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"felt like I was gasping for air, thirsty for water like I hadn't had any in a month..."

This sentence made me ache for the one who used to make me feel like this. I miss it!

Lovely story.

SugaranytimeSugaranytimeabout 4 years ago
yumm

love it - love the guys tactic - and the fact he will bring out what she didnt even know she wanted - call me........

visioneervisioneerabout 4 years ago

An intriguing beginning, RedExploring. I am curious to read where and how far you take this.

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotover 2 years ago

A perfect beginning.

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