All Comments on 'In The Dunes'

Excellent story. 5-stars.

1. Thank you for a story told with true sense of class.

2. The people are real, not aggressively looking but still open.

3. I liked their taking time and milking the pleasure of being together.

4. Well done

Wonderful story. We want more. We are in our eighties!

Fun story, I liked it! I liked how casual they both were about their beach encounter and how easily they both responded sexually to each other. I love making love outdoors myself and it's extras special making love on the beach...very erotic and sensual, thank you for a fun story that invited me to engage in some of my own self pleasure ;)

The story is OK, but it belongs in the loving wives section, which should be the loving spouses section. Both characters are cheaters; cuckolding their respective spouses.

Thanks for sharing your work.

I like this. No harm, no foul. And there shouldn't be any guilt

Passion enacted upon.

Liked it!

A tender love story of two chance meetings and immediate attraction leading to the type of sex wanted by both married spouses. A quiet romance with a fairly long introduction to the union (s) with fruit, wine, and homemade wine glasses that added to the growing intimacy between them. Aside from the second meeting, this is a believable story, and the sex scene(s) were well-described. Wouldn't guilt-free adultery be a blessing for those so disposed? A beautiful well-written story.

A wonderful vignette demonstrating your avowed interest in misbehavior. I can't help thinking I'd like to misbehave with you.

Couldn't even finish this pile of literary shit. People have no respect for anything that's good and honest. Hope both cheaters catch a couple of Stds.