by PurpleThread
Would have been nice if it had been tagged properly as nonconsent/rape. I mean, who doesnt love going from 'throb' to 'sob', RIGHT?
... but also sad and depressing - and NOT really erotic, since the sex in this story is more or less rape.
The story written well and gave sight as if you were reading the doctors true notes. I would of loved to been the test subject with her.
Some of us like build-up, and if your instinct was to have more before you got to the sex I think you should have run with that. The basic concept of the story is sound, and I did enjoy it.
Left me wanting more! Are there plans to add additional chapters to this storyline?