All Comments on 'In Total Control...Unfortunately'

I think this particular author is some sort of stupid woke idiot that has no understanding of human nature and what really drives people. Her February Sucks the story was pretty bad at least the initial version and this one is also way off the mark.

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Consider the wife's question, “So why don't I blow him more often? she wondered.”

The answer is obvious.

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Because she doesn't want to…. BECAUSE she doe snot REALLY love her husband. Later on in the story we find out that she has already had several sexual Affairs including being sexually assaulted by a man at work which she for some reason finds erotic.!?!?!?

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Even more bizarre is the wife's internal thinking when she says to herself “As a result, what she had was complete control in the blow job department, which, ironically, was exactly the opposite of what she wanted.”

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This of course is a massive lie.The wife is in complete control of their marital sexual relations and that is why she controls the blow job!! Like fucking duh Indeed in this awful terrible story the wife actually admits to herself that she hands out the blowjobs as some sort of incentive for good behavior…. NOT because she has any sexual feelings and intimacy and love for her husband. That is why it is obvious to anybody that the wife telling yourself that she doesn't want control of when BJ are given is a LIE

Great story!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Treatise on How to get divorced. Nothing interesting or clever about it. 1 star

Pretty sure if she talked to him the husband would be more than up with it, communication, good communication can enhance a couples life.

Too often, like this story, one or other keeps secrets and both lose out.

Bit this is sadly common in marriages, wives are more than happy to have their husband tend to them but hold back on giving themselves. After all oral is something you give to a partner to make them feel good, you give and don’t get much out of it but their pleasure.

Too many wives use sex as a power tool to manipulate their husband into behaving how they want them to which is rather sad and goes towards cheating and couples seeking something elsewhere rather than at home.

WTF was that. Good thing it is only750 words of crap. If she wanted to be used as a slut then tell her old man .

Beyond stupid. Her loving husband is a man and he'd do exactly that if she explained it to him. I guess next step is to lie and cheat finding some stud to force her. Good first step to idiotically and selfishly destroying a marriage.

Pretty good flash story. Unfortunately, a lot of couples don't tell their SO their desires for fear of judgement or, in this case, they believe their SO isn't able to do it. She will never know unless she communicates her desires.

that took some thinking and you nailed it

I will never understand women. Rape, as I've heard and read, is just about the most horrible and degrading act that can be committed against a woman. They can get thru it, but never forget it, even after years of therapy and counseling. They will never stop hating the rapist. And then comes the term 'rape fantasy'. How? WHAT? why?? This story (collection of paragraphs) shows writing talent, well put together, but it boggles the mind. I remain confused.

Interesting insight into Rachel and an intriguing way to share that insight. Like the honesty in your writing.

A reflective tale, combines a cacophony of conflicting thoughts. Well done in such a brief economy of words.

Stupid, selfish, disrespectful slut.

So her husband, is the love of her life, perhaps father of her children, but obviously not first in her heart. He gets second best treatment from her, he is a placeholder for her memories, his soul mate but apparently not hers. She is still fixated on the jackle who took what he wanted from her, didn't ask, didn't reciprocate affection or gratitude. He treated her with disrespect and callous disregard. He sexually assaulted her is what he did... and she liked it? If only Rachel's husband could have a moment of enlightenment.

You write beautifully but your stories always elicit such uncomfortable feelings. As such I’m always torn between giving you a 5 or a 1. This story I will give a 5 to help balance all the 1’s your haters are sure to rate you. I’m betting you’re the Literotica Queen of bimodal scoring. LOL. Keep it up.

You delve into deep, forbidden, uncomfortable thoughts as well as any author on the site.

Yea, as a husband, if you are good, you might get sucked off on the ABC,s. You know anniversaries, birthdays, and maybe even Christmas. But the first time she cheats, that strange cock will explode in her mouth.

Poor bastard for a husband.....

I am enjoying your stories. Don't know how much of you is in this story, or just your fictional character. Doesn't matter either way. Keep exploring, keep writing.

Oral sex with husband just isn’t exciting after being orally raped by her boss.

"That thing [oral sex] you're remembering? She ditched it in the honeymoon suite!" - Al Bundy

Low self-esteem allows one to feel they deserve to be mistreated. For some, it actually reaches the point of sexual gratification. This lady knew she was being abused, but thought she deserved the abuse and found it rewarding. She assumes her spouse could never abuse her in the way she craves, but she never asks him to try. She withholds her BJ's to exert some control over her hubby, whom she wishes she could abuse. Twisted lady.

As the song says, "Some of them want to abuse you, some of them want to be abused."

Nice one, KDL, let's see some more.

I'm so confused!

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She was a slut yet denies her husband this pleasure. I would say she sucks, but we know that's rare.

Now that she’s remembering/thinking about it, it won’t be long. She’s already dismissed her husband as “forceful” participant in her fantasy. I give this marriage another two years.

I think it's great that you are giving such insight into the way a womans mind works. It will deter those naive young men who still harbour the fantasy of a loving balanced relationship. Just don't bother guys, as you can see it will just lead to heartache.

You’ve perfected the erotic ‘short’. 5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Great story.

I have written something similar when the swinger husband ponders in Ch 14: "But once you've done EVERYTHING you both like ... so many times, ... together, ... a yearning sets in."

I think you might have delved deeper into that theme of "why did I get so turned on by THAT experience and not so much by my husband?" Try taking this same story and write a much longer version, without limiting yourself to 750 words.

5!

Great Story!

Once again recommend reading this ode to the BTB trolls:

https://literotica.com/s/a-gathering-of-trolls

After reading all of the comments, I have to post again.

First point:. Rape is a violent crime. It is all the more horrific because it is extremely common for women to orgasm while they are being raped. This obviously inspires guilt and self doubts about their own innocence. This lends credence to all of the presumptions that the woman is somehow responsible for the sexual assault.

Second Point:. A woman who has been forced to perform oral sex and found herself becoming aroused as she is being orally raped is going to have an understandable aversion to performing oral sex on her husband. He would likely be even less understanding if she attempted to explain it to him.

Finally, you might want to read a story that was posted by an author, CuriousChristianWife, about a year ago. She was so severely savaged by the BTB trolls that she hasn't been back.

Sick woman. I totally dislike 👎 this story although it is well written.

5 for the writing, 0 for the content. 2 stars.

Bill S.

Good flash story - well written

Did Rachel do it with the married lawyer before or after she was married?

That is a hole in the story, but still a very good and well-written story about actual real-life traumas of sort. Rachel could have stopped the "rapes" at any point but chpose not to do so.

Yes, The Lawyer had nonconsenting sex that is classified as RAPE. However, Rachel appears to be submissive and her husband has her on a pedestal so he would never force her for oral sex and she treats it a a special gift when she does. Interesting on her part. Thank You!

Quick and dirty treat.

So many writers create these perfect, unconflicted, and congruent characters. In reality, those people are not real. As the song says, everyone is a mix of contradictions, partly truth and partly fiction. Only in bad fiction is every action motivated or enabled, as it were, by clear, consistent, and well-considered motives. This writer "gets it" and creates characters who are perfect for fiction, as they work perfectly in the story arc. 5/5+++++