All Comments on 'In Training'

5* to every writer not invited to this 'challenge' who did it anyway. Particularly since at least one of the clique who was invited couldn't get it right with the word count.

Now THAT'S what I'm talking about!

That was funny

he ended it resolutely. A strong man's response to a weak marriage. Weak marriages are bad for civilization. She's still trying to lie her way out of the mess even after she's been caught. She's probably really sexy and cute, just kind of stupid. That's a losing trade off when shopping for wives.

She'll be moved in with the sports car guy within the weak. She'll marry him as soon as her divorce goes through, just to prove it was love, and not simply being a cheating slut. You just wonder how long she'll put up with sports car's cheating before she takes the kid(s) and tries to make something out of the stupid choices she's made.

Being 750 words prevents us from criticizing you for the fact that sports car guy is not spending the rest of his life in a wheel chair. Of course you'll wait for that bit of revenge until after he totally fucks over slut wife.

This one is the best yet. Thanks for the effort.

I don't really see much in these 750 stories but this one is OK.

Seems she suck started the engine on her new life.

While it's true that initially only certain writers were invited, but the event was then opened to all, no need to "do it anyway."

At least she didn't try to tell him she learned how to do that from an article in a magazine. Some things take lots of practice to develop and some aversions are hard to overcome.

It flowed nicely considering how few words you had.

No, this was a very good story. You told the whole story within the boundaries. Happy you posted one.

On the one hand now she learned to suck cock well, on the other hand, she learned it someplace else.

The question remains though, why was the other guy able to teach her how to suck cock so well in a short period of time (assuming they've had sex a few times); whereas, he hasn't been able to in years. He was obviously the safe long term, boring, sexually not overly attractive guy, and the other guy was the hunk, sexually attractive that revved up her juices, but who knows what he has so he won't commit t someone like her, but will shag her for a while.

She doesn't have enough to keep a guy like the lover for a long term relationship, he doesn't have what it takes to get her sexually juiced up. Ahh, to be ordinary. I guess they can no longer be ordinary together any longer.

Good story for the husband, at least he won't have to worry with children in a broken home. Anyone who cheats that quickly after getting married has no integrity or value.

Well written, thanks for posting.

Probably coulda even done it in 650 words, but these are great. Adios, Bitch. At least her next Hubby will benefit from her training.

5*

But it seemed he was prepared for what he saw considering he was moved out and selling their house. A BTB - short form. Well done.

He got right to the Point . No arguing No Pleading. No Cliches.

So hard to do in few words.

So very well done here.

Top ratings from me.

...well, not sweet--but sharp and very effective. To change the sport:

game, set, match.

Thanks, ohio

Effective 750 words LW's story. Not an easy task to take on. 5 Stars.

Thanks for writing, it was a very fun read.

5 stars easy

Well done a tight little package.

And no electronic devices or private investigators involved.

Lue

This is my favorite of these stories

Good for him who needs a cheating slut for a wife

To me this short story pointed to the rest of the work of this author I had not discovered before.

This guy CharlieB4 is one of the best writers on LW.

Bluntly, the 750’s have been disappointing.

Some less so but mostly more so.

Here, finally, is an excellent one.

‘Short stories’ are a thing unto themselves.

*very* short stories are as well - they are not merely shortened short stories. Here, with this one, CharlieB4 has done a very satisfying job.

Thanks CB4!

JMSA.

Was the 750 word only for loving wives?

Would have to be the worst category to write for. Why would anyone choose this section. They are lucky this is the only one I have scored. The second that I made it to the end, and this one better than 90% of the normal lw stories. Finally one actually worth reading.

Was GOOD

The boxing commentary fit perfectly. Great job.

You scored a knockout with this one.

Again. Really good story. Enjoyed the boxing analogy.

The rapid fire dialog with comments put the image in my head of a hooked fish being reeled in. Despite its best efforts to zig, zag and deflect, the fish is . . . Caught! Nicely done. Thanks.

It was well told. When you can write a 750 word story that doesn't seem unnatural or forced to fit, that is good writing. Excellent job! Thank you.

Great read. Ten stars!

why do you go to cheating Wives sex stories if you are anti cheating Wives? its like going to gay and lesbian when you are a homophobe, or incest when you hate "incestors"

why this sick need to go to sex stories website to read about guys being betrayed and exacting extreme vengeance?

why be like that loathesome pitiful creature, invalid disabled war criminal 26thnc? is that really necesary?

I don't usually give 5* for 750-word stories, because they are so short.

But, this is one of the exceptions.

Well paced and interesting.

Even American war criminals have favorites. This is one of mine.

Just commit suicide you retarded cunt, no need for more garbage in this world

Short and not so sweet - 5*

to the anon calling out sbrooks:

"sbrooks*** why do you and your ilk love these sex stories with no sex just BTB"

Do you have evidence sbrooks ONLY likes those stories, or did you strawman brooks?

"why do you go to cheating Wives sex stories if you are anti cheating Wives? its like going to gay and lesbian when you are a homophobe, or incest when you hate "incestors" "

Because the category of 'loving wives is not limited to only worship of cheating wives. It's far more of a broad spectrum than your narrow mind allows. To use your example it would be like YOU going to a pride parade and being mean to trans people because, "THAT'S not gay, get it outta my parade" That's how bigoted you sound right now.

"why this sick need to go to sex stories website to read about guys being betrayed and exacting extreme vengeance?" You call justice seeking as 'sick'. Why? It's natural that humans want justice. Also sbrooks and many others don't discriminate. We love stories about cheated wives getting revenge on a cheating husband. And you'll need to cite examples of what you consider 'extreme'. You throw around way too many accusations with zero examples. So stop being lazy. This isn't twitter.

"why be like that loathesome pitiful creature, invalid disabled war criminal 26thnc? is that really necesary?"

once again, you assign a lot of mean and hurtful labels towards people, and provide NOTHING useful. No examples, no insights as to WHY you feel the things you feel. Most people would call you useless. And I'm one of them.

This was one of the best 750 word efforts I've read from any author. Crisp, brilliant dialogue and a plot with real pathos. If you do another one (and you should be invited soon) you have set a high bar for the follow up.

Five stars and a kudos.

1 star - lame

Oh snap

Boom! There it is 5 stars.

Loved it! 5 stars.

750 words is difficult. This could have benefited from a few more words.

750 blessing and curse all in one neat package

on one hand all is said and done

on the other I would like to know more about the fallout and conclusion...

BUSTED!!

I like it, you done well for only 750 words ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Agree with the others.

Very well done. For 750 words, this was top notch.

Nailed it. Good job.

Boom!!!! Now thats how you write a quickie!

Wanting more

Well done

Top class

Unfinished. No aftermath or payback.

Loved it. I don't understand all these commenters who have to have an Excel spreadsheet and blueprints for every story or they think it's incomplete. Not everything should have to be spelled out for you; there's an element of artistry here. Sometimes less is more, it leaves your imagination some room.

Still a war criminal, still of sbrooks103x ilk, and still love this story.

Oh burn!!!!

🤣

She couldn't last 18 months? Damn, he dodged a bullet. Also, THIS is the way to wrap up a 750 word story.