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Anonymousover 2 years agoFelt like half the story should have happened between this chapter and the last. Felt haphazard and hard to follow
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HalfShim@HalfShimI write under the pen name 'Caroline Waters.' All of my other works can be found on Amazon and KDP. I'm a fan of mind control in general, but not standard hypnosis as the means of control. Magical? Science Fiction? Squicky? Any of those float my boat. Throw in corsets? Latex?...
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