All Comments on 'Indian Delight'

by tomtom45

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Remarkably well written story

But doesn't hide that fact that you lean towards being a pervert at the very least, or a child molestor at worst

HedonistusHedonistusalmost 15 years ago
Responsible

An engaging story from the first sentence to the last which

reveals that you are a responsible, sensitive and caring man.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Don't listen to the guy who called you a child molestor

Preeti could very well be a young girl of 16, or 17 or maybe even 18. Thought the character might be underage, but that doesn't mean she is a little kid. Anyway, a really interesting story.

"So began a beautiful symbiotic relationship that lasted for nearly two years until Preeti finished school and began her studies at a local college." I took this line from the story itself. You can see that Preeti was in 11th grade when Tom started fucking her. Well, she is NOT a kid!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Anatomy lesson

Your story has him one third of the way into her before he encounters her hymen. This is incorrect. The hymen is at the entrance to the vagina, not part way into the vagina. Otherwise a delightful story.

steverob1054steverob1054over 2 years ago

Excellent - so much affection and sincerity - beautifully written. Thank you

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