by brucewayneegypt
Would love to see the illustrated version of this!
waiting for its next part
You had conceived a good plot but made it too quick
Great story please write next part
Good start! now bring on the extra chapters!
Wow, Just Wow
Next part when?
Nice story please write next part sortly I will waiting for next part
Definitely need more of this!!!! Also, a description of the other women would be nice too... Be nice if you made the story 2 to 3 pages, be alot better read.... Cause it sucks you get to the best part & then it's done...