by vegitto306
Now we're starting to get in to some revenge action, if he could just slow down all of his fucking other men's wife's for a little bit. He might save his father's Business and reputation sooner then later! Hope you keep writing on this story line..
Amazing story.. If the plot keeps going like this then it'll be a great story, hope you continue to write the story.
This is awesome! Great work! Please put up the next part soon and let him get a turn with all of them!
WTF is every one raving about in this story? It was just a plain Jane story that you read in about 25% of all the others in this genre! What the fuck was so good about it. Explain it to a retired English Literature Professor, PLEASE?
There was a bit of story in this chapter yet wasn’t enough to give satisfaction. Not worth the read.
One more chapter as a last chance to this writer.
~ Ruby Black