by Fallen Savior
A very well written short story. I have been reading a few of the Halloween contest stories and they are very much like your story. They are familiar themes but very well written. Good Job!
I was excited to see it, and I hope to see more out of this author. Can't wait to read a sequel or another story from him.
*chants* SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!...Oh please write more..and good luck with the contest!
This would not ordinarily be my cup of tea...but the author came recommended...
The sex was hot...very hot...the dialogue believeable...the imagery so descriptive...I got caught up in it...and it was over all too soon.
You definitely have talent!