All Comments on 'Infinity Cube Ch. 02-03'

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zena99zena999 months ago

I am loving this. I assume Ryan will get the cube back from Alice shortly. It would be interesting if it were used on Winston so that he actively supports his girlfriend in fucking Ryan.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I am still finding things confusing due to lack of explanation of everything. You need to do more than use show people having conversations that lack actual depth. The characters are having conversations about immediate wants or even the effect of those forced wants but the in depth information required to understand anything more than the basics has been completely ignored. I like and enjoy the story and I find the infinity cube an interesting centerpiece although the parallels to The Avengers is obvious which doesn’t detract from what it appears you are trying to get across and since an all powerful force from an item can vary greatly in what is considered all powerful or reality bending which leaves things wide open for your interpretation which can do nothing but help you create your storylines reality. I still can’t wait to see what direction this story takes after you hopefully clear up some pot points. I hope you take this post as it was meant which is just trying to be helpful criticism which is of course just my opinions. I do truly enjoy this story and anyone who puts themselves out there to post their creations is far above what my capabilities are as well as the bravery required to put yourself out there which ranks right up there with speaking in public as some of the most frightening things people fear. Thanks for your time and effort creating and posting your work.

SouperKev777SouperKev7778 months ago

Weird and a little trippy but entertaining can’t wait to see what happens next!

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Xzy89c1Xzy89c18 months ago

Will keep going. Body changing not on my list but I love sci fi and interested about void

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